This is my story about my harsh life. I’m sixteen years old but I start to like a girl in my class since the first year. She is my true love that is a secret I kept for 4 years. When I turn sixteen, I start to reveal my feelings to the class by writing a mystery’s moment and now the whole class know that I like her. They might think that I only like her as a friend but in facts, I really love her. Since I know her, this is the first year I start to talked to her. Not talk but only chatting using phone. I’m happy for a few weeks because she keep chatting with me. We talked about our life, our school and much more. One day, she asked me if I really like her. I only can said yes. A few weeks passed by. I don’t know why suddenly she stop chatting with me. I’m waiting for months for her to chat with me but the things I get is sadness and hopeless heart. When we met in school, the only thing I do is looking at her and miss her. We rarely talk and face to face. I can only look at her from far. Every night that I used to fill the time by chatting with her is now fill with cry and sad songs I sing for her that she will never be able to listen. Today, I saw writing on her table in class. It said “Do you love me?”. It make me think that she likes somebody else. I already told her that I love her so if the guy he likes was me, she wouldn’t asked that again. Now all I can do is cry for my hopeless feelings that I kept for a long time and become lonely forever. – Iqbal
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