I am saddened to see that this world still strives to keep some people behind purposely. When does the color of someone’s skin not be a barrier? When does someone’s gender not be an issue? When does someone’s financial level not be a blocker to a better life?
When writing your story, please use correct spelling and grammar. Please use a capital I rather than a lower i, and use apostrophes correctly. Such as I'm, don't, can't.